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Beneath the Ocean by ~-ultima-:icon-ultima-:



im just a man in the ocean
trying to find my way to the bottom of it all.
its far down and the whales are taunting me,
but i know ill make it through the mile fall

i turn my back on the sun
and endure the cold and preassure of the depth
there's a sunken treasure down there that time forgot
and i know i have to make it before i rest

oh there are bones down here
with convicted sould still trapped by unnamed sins
a prison gaurded by the haunted inmates with no eyes
but they still find a way to judge your journeys end

I know that i still have to
forsake air and warmth and everything i once knew
to dive to what i need, to get to what called me here
i cant see my hand before me, but i can see you

i can see that this is all for you
yes, i wowuld turn down the sun, and kiss
each and ever star goodbye, forget the moon
thers an empty down hear i cant measure in distance

its a hollow world beneath the waves
with no sky, just endless blue of an open sea
but i found what i needed among the forgotten bones
i found the value you never knew you had to me

I found love in a nameless ocean
where god forgot to bestow life and reason
©2007-2010 ~-ultima-
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Author's Comments

Sometimes, you really need to search deep to find something meaningful.

Ok, enough puns. I do think though that as hard as it seems, people need to do some soul searching to get the true nature of things that matter to them.

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:iconarchfriend:
The fifth verse, or stanza, or whatever, needs to be fixed, or maybe in the sixth verse you can make the spelling and grammar even worse and go for a theme of deterioration just like sunken items resting on an ocean bed.

after all this time you don't submit anything you're still bad at spelling.
:iconfukksistero1:
This is nice, Jason.

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:iconrockme2sleep:
agreed with the soul searching! funny how it makes us all act like fools ;)

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